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Oct. 6th, 2009

MORE THAN A LIFETIME by Theresa Laws



Theresa Laws is a good writer who has delivered a romantic journey that many readers will enjoy. I'm a sucker for ghost and angel stories and this story of past life and lost love fit well in that category. This is the story of Brooke and Evan and their quest to find the love they lost.
Filled with a nice blend of romantic sweetness and tension, this kept me turning the pages.

Brooke is a complex character filled with a nagging sense that something is wrong with the world. She leads a perfectly normal life with a steady relationship and job. Here life is complicated by her irrational fear of water, something that has plagued her all her life.

Evan is a dark, mysterious character who arrives on the scene just in time to rescue Brook from plummeting into a raging river. Hiding his past, Evan is gone before Brooke has a chance to find out who her rescuer is. This daring rescue sends Brooke down a road of discovery as she tries to track him down. I was ready to go with Brooke on her quest as she searched for answers about Evan, her past life and who she really was and enjoyed the ride.

Here is where my nitpick comes in. This was a very big story packed into a very short read. There was the potential there for lots of character change and emotional twists.  Sadly it was just over too soon. MORE THAN A LIFETIME was good but this reader was left wanting more.

I'm hoping Theresa Laws has longer works planned for the future. She has the potential to be an emotional heavy hitter and I would grab any longer work of hers off the shelf.

Three Mystique Moons.  (Enjoyable)
Class One sensuality.  (Limited)

Sarah Gentili, Co-Owner Mystique Books 
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Oct. 2nd, 2009

THE TEMP by Minx Malone



Ava Kincaid comes from a very wealthy family and is somewhat spoiled.  After her boyfriend, Gavin Sloan, leaves her, and she distances herself from her family, Ava is forced to find a job.  Unfortunately, the only job that she can find is a temp job, and Gavin is her boss.

THE TEMP is an entertaining, erotic, short story with likable characters and hot, sex scenes.  Ava has grown since Gavin walked out on her.  She is no longer a spoiled, rich girl, who expects things handed to her on a silver platter.  Gavin has been trying to forget Ava, whom he loves but feels he can't compete with her family's money and attitudes.  These two have explosive chemistry and this reader got a sense of a growing love and understanding between them.

Four Mystique Moons.  (Excellent)
Class Four sensuality.  (Romantic erotica)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator
 
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

LUNAR MATES: CLAIMING THE MOON by Loribelle Hunt



When Ellen is attacked, members of the group of Hunters to which she belongs rally around her.  Clint Osborn, the werewolf who should be her mate but refuses to acknowledge her, arrives to help protect her.  Will Ellen and Clint, finally, be together or will outside forces and secrets tear them apart?

CLAIMING THE MOON is a werewolf romance with some steamy sex scenes but with a heroine with some annoying traits.  Ellen is, at times, TSTL (AKA "too stupid to live").  She seems to put herself into dangerous situations.  After realizing that you have a stalker, it is not prudent to go into town without telling anybody, especially, after you have been moved to a safe house?  Ms. Hunt did create an interesting world, and she caused this reader to have interest in the next book in the series.  I just hope the heroine in the next book is a little more thoughtful and prudent.


Three and a half Mystique Moons.  (Good Work)
Class Four sensuality.  (Romantic erotica)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

WOLF BITTEN by Ella Drake



Brock Wolfrik, a werewolf, has been held captive for three years by members of Wolfsbane and forced to fight other werewolves.  After his escape, Brock's one goal is to find Allie Greene, his human mate, who ran from him three years ago, and make her his.  Unfortunately, Allie might have other ideas and Wolfsbane is a threat to both of them.

WOLF BITTEN is a short, werewolf romance, which skims the surface as far as world-building goes and has issues with character motivation for the heroine.  Fortunately, the hero is great and helps to make the book worthwhile.  There is not enough explanation of the werewolf society and the Wolfsbane gang for my taste.  While I can forgive Allie's fear and her running from Brock, I have trouble believing her reactions upon being reunited with Brock.  However, Brock is a heroic figure because he fights his baser instinct to give Allie what she needs.

All in all, WOLF BITTEN has some good points but isn't to my taste.

Two and a half Mystique Moons.  (Not my speed)
Class Three sensuality.  (Standard Romance)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Sep. 14th, 2009

LUCK OF THE DRAW by Teryl Oswald



Quite frankly, this is one of the finest books published in 2009.  Author Teryl Oswald speaks to the reader, or at least this reader, on many, many levels.  I was completely fooled on multiple levels, especially:  the identity of the mystery lottery winner; the book's hero; and what the book's theme was supposed to be.  Was it Courage or was it Love?  Whatever the case, I was stunned by the honesty portrayed in the story, each character's winning or losing struggles, and the humbling look at aging as hospice care in today's culture.  Indeed, the aged deserve better than to be shuttled off to unknown halls to be seen as burdens of the more able-bodied. 

I love this book.  I cried when it was over.  It moved me that much.  I even cheered when Amanda kicked loose of Erik's abuses.  (Major Pain, indeed.)

Five Mystique Moons.  (Cosmic)
Class One sensuality.  (Limited)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Aug. 26th, 2009

BLIND SIGHT by Susan Shay



Keegan and Cassie.  Sounds like an 80's pop group, yes?  But no, what we have here, in BLIND SIGHT is a duet of lovers in search of--and deterimed--to take out a serial killer.  I won't go into much more into the plot because, as a Romantic Suspense novel, I want to show due respect for the suspense of the plot.  However, we are dealing with a protective brother, an almost-divorced sister, a charming psychic, and a cornucopia of cranky but lovable old men--who resemble my grandfather quite a bit, God Rest His Soul.

I will say that the first 45 pages of the story needed to be cut.  Romantic Suspense is difficult.  Start with Keegan entering the store, anxious for his sister, and seeing Cassie looking like "cat vomit."  No one needs to know the stuff before that point and not knowing it opens up a can of suspense.  (Just my suggestion; trash it if you wish.)

Really, a Suspense/Thriller is difficult to pen.  No word is to be used without it meaning something; if it's on the page then it must mean something to the mystery.  The Murder She Wrote episodes are good examples of this.  Whether the driver did or did not wear gloves when picking Jessica up from her office  mattered.  Another good example, a clinic really, is The Book of Lies.  Intense and thrilling, with everyone identified and their roles confirmed--the good, the bad and the confused--but their motivation pushed the story forward...as well as the threat of something wild on the next page.  Unfortuntely, BLIND SIGHT did not have that.  However, that doesn't mean it is a wall-banger.  It's not.  It's a very interesting story with a loathesome villian doing unspeakable things.

For this reader, the RoSuspense didn't work for me, but that's not saying much.  I'm extremely hard to impress when it comes to RoSuspense.  It's hard work to balance good sexual tension with terror and revulsion.  (That's why I don't write it.  LOL.)  BLIND SIGHT is a good effort in a hard genre.  The storyline did not dissappoint but the sexual tension was not believable to this reader.  That, and the very dragging first 45 pages.

Two things for author Susan Shay to remember: 
a)  Feel free to ignore me for an ignorant slob.
b) Keep writing what you're passionate about!!


Three and a half Mystique Moons.  (Good Work)
Class Three sensuality.  (Standard romance)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Jul. 25th, 2009

PRELUDE TO CAMELOT by Cynthia Breeding



In PRELUDE TO CAMELOT, Ms. Breeding takes a look  at the well-known characters from the Arthurian legends in their early years.  The reader is given a glimpse into the origin and development of such characters as Arthur, Gwenhwyfar, Galahad(Lancelot), and Nimue.  It is evident that Ms. Breeding has studied Arthurian lore and loves her subject, because she breathes life into her characters.  Arthur and Galahad become great friends and there is a foreshadowing of the trials to come.  However, in this book, Arthur and Galahad are young men, and Arthur is just learning the leadership skills for which he becomes legendary.  
 
This story contains magic and magical creatures, many battles, and lusty men and women.  Arthur and Galahad are very much players--to use a modern term.  However, they treat women better than most men of the time.  It's not called the Dark ages for nothing.  Be warned this book is not for the faint of heart, there is much violence and the aftermath of a rape scene.
 
All in all, PRELUDE TO CAMELOT is an enjoyable fantasy read, which I recommend.


Four Mystique Moons (Excellent)
Class Two sensuality  (Limited)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator, Mystique Books
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Jun. 21st, 2009

BAD-ASS FAERIES - Anthology



Bad-Ass Faeries is a themed anthology edited by Danielle Ackley-McPhail, L. Jagi Lamplighter, Lee Hillman, and Jeff Lyman. Packed full of mischief, magic and mayhem this anthology delivers a delight romp through the land of Fae. The premise that Fairies and magic exist in our daily lives without our knowledge is played to hilt with brilliant results. While most anthology of this nature end up being a mixed bag, I was surprised by the exceptional writing and creative storylines.

Warring faerie tribes, futuristic assassins, faerie westerns and a good dose of mystery and Noir fill the pages of this fun read. while some stories are light and show the fun, mischief we have often come to expect in Fae stories others take a darker turn.

"House Arrest" by Keith R.A. DeCandido,"A Pressing Problem" by Donald W. Shank, and "Down These Mean Streets A Faerie Must Go" by John Sunseri are some of my personal favorites. Private Eyes, Detectives and the Faerie Mafia make for unique and original stories.

"At The Crossroads" by Danielle Ackley-McPhail is one of the true gems in Bad-Ass Faeries and my favorite tale. A fine, exciting tale with compelling characters. At its heart, it is a compelling story about Lance a half human, half Fae man and the women he loves. Suzanne is a full blooded Fae as is her brother Gavin. All three are part of a motorcycle gang lead by Lance. But faerie society dislikes faeries who associate with humans and loathe half breeds. When Suzanne and Lance are exposed the Black Fae and his minions are sent to kill them.

Tugging at the readers heart and hitting all the right notes, "At The Crossroads" is just one example of the treasure trove waiting for readers in "Bad Ass Faeries."

Four and One Half Mystique Moons.  (Outstanding)
Class One Sensuality.  (Limited)

Sarah Gentili, Co-Owner Mystique Books
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Jun. 19th, 2009

PRELUDE TO CAMELOT by Cynthia Breeding



It is often hard to decide what quasi-historical figure has scholars, literati, or simple fans more curious about their childhood:  Jesus or Arthur.  Equally, not much in the way of scholastic canon is available for either of them, but the two make vibrant and exciting character studies.  Sometimes I even wonder who has the greater fanbase.  Jesus of Nazareth or Arthur of Camelot?  Perhaps "fan base" isn't the correct word for followers of these icons, for many consider their lives to be models for their own and follow with religious ferver. 

But these are issues for another blog to address.  This entry is to reflect on Cynthia Breeding's entry into the childhood of Arthur of Camelot.  In truth, a fascinating entry, with the author spinning the threads of the very complex web of Arthurania with a deft hand at the wheel.  If literary license had been taken, then one can forgive the author  for doing so as the story became clear and easy to read with these (possible) adjustments.  [Just how many permutations of Morgan(a) Le Fey can there be?  But I digress.]

Cynthia Breeding's PRELUDE TO CAMELOT is a lovely and fascinating read, a book worth of being shelved with my Arthurania fiction and non-fiction.  Additionally, I believe that it will be needful reading for the author's upcoming Kensington title, CAMELOT'S DESTINY.  Whether or not the two books are linked, beyond the obvious, I do not know, not having read the book, but I believe that PRELUDE TO CAMELOT is a worthy read.  Recommended.

Four and One Half Mystique Moons.  (Outstanding)
Class One sensuality.  (Limited)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Jun. 12th, 2009

A LITTLE LIGHT MAGIC by Joy Nash


Tori Morgan longs for a family.  Nick Santangelo has too much family for his peace of mind.  He's also guy who has his feet firmly on the ground.  None of this fluffy, magic mumbo-jumbo, thank you very much.  But Tori had a few spells up her sleeve and Nick was about to find out that where their's faith and love, there is magic.

A LITTLE LIGHT MAGIC is, by far, Joy Nash's finest work to date.  I've enjoyed watching her career grow from epress to New York publishing house, and have enjoyed her celtic and immortals books, but in truth her transition to contemporary romance is long overdue.  She's just that good. 

For a light summer read that's charmingly packed with lovely secondary characters, sizzing sensuality, and a glorious  lesson in family, pick A LITTLE LIGHT MAGIC.  Highly, highly recommended. 

Five Mystique Moons.  (Outstanding)
Class Three sensuality.  (Standard romance)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com
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Jun. 10th, 2009

IMMORTAL OUTLAW by Lisa Hendrix



Cursed by a vile witch, Brand Einarsson's nine vikings lived an immortal live as half-man and half-beast, transitioning into their animal halves with the setting (or rising) sun.  Steinnar was one of the nine, cursed to prowl the night as a lion, the beast within him overwhelming the man inside so that he never remembered his doings as the cat.  He did, however, remember the scars on his friends' bodies from the lion's claws when they'd been too close during the night.

Marian didn't realize the danger she courted when the followed--rather, harrassed--Steinnar into assiting her and her brother Robin.  The youth had been put on a near fool's quest by his father and if a busted leg didn't keep him from his appointment with the king then the assassin sent to make him "vanish" was expected to.  Except, in a glorious twist of fate, that assassin was Steinnar.  Could things get any more crazy?  No worries, because author Lisa Hendrix has penned a fabulous tale of heroics, curses, and passion.

This is not your mother's Robin Hood.  It's not Disney's tale either.  Steinnar curses like a sailor and sniffs behind Marian's skirts like a randy, male lion.  Luckily, Marian is more than a match for the beast, meeting his lust and his passion with her own, and battling his grief and curse with the courage of a lioness.

Excellent work!  I can't wait to read the next book in the tale. 


Five Mystique Moons.  (Outstanding)
Class Three sensuality.  (Standard romance)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Jun. 3rd, 2009

Sea Lord by Virginia Kantra



Outstanding.  This was the fantastic conclusion to Virginia Katra's Children of the Sea books and it left me breathless.

Hardened by his self-imposed exile, Lord Conn ap Llyr has become as chill and relentless as the cold North Sea.  Duty kept him shorebound, a harsh exile for any child of the sea, and the dry air of land had seemingly leached all emotion from this selkie.  Yet something had pulled him from his stone fortress, a need for magick--a need for a prophecy fulfilled. Demons were attacking and Conn didn't have the strength or the allies needed to keep the Fire Children at bay.

Lucy Hunter had a secret.  She had powerful magick.  Unfortunately she wasn't often allowed to use it--or her mind, for that matter--since her overprotective brothers basically looked through her instead of at her.  Not to mention her troubles caring for an alcoholic father who spent more days and nights at the pub than bonding with the one child who stood by him. 

Born of silkie blood and magick, and yet bound to the earth as no child of sea had been before, Lucy was unique...and tortured.  The sea frightened her.  Unlike her brother Dylan, who'd turned with no fuss, Lucy's transition into her selkie skin had been too terrifrying for the child to endure--and no one had been there to help her understand her body's changes.  (I remember my puberty.  It also sucked wads.)  As such, Lucy is shorebound in a way that her selkie brethren could never comprehend.  Nor could they accept it.

Conn needed Lucy elsewhere than her island, he needed her at his home, Caer Subai.  Refusal wasn't an option.  Kidnapping, however, was.

An awesom book!  Edge of the seat tension, great bad guys, subtle plot twists, and lovely, lovely scenes of intimacy.  SEA LORD is a fabulous end to a fantastic series.  I was sorry to let the book close.  Perhaps Virginia Kantra will return us to her world in later books.  I'd buy them.


Five Mystique Moons.  (Outstanding)
Class Three sensuality.  (Standard romance)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

May. 25th, 2009

Stolen by Loribelle Hunt



Aaron Crews goes to a party thrown by Todd Jacobs in order to see Todd's Victorian erotica collection.  While there, Aaron meets Eden Scott, a woman with whom he has been having an e-mail correspondence.  Aaron and Eden are very attracted to each other, but Eden has an ulterior motive for seeking Aaron out.

STOLEN:  BETWEEN THE COVERS is a short, erotic romance with a light BDSM theme.  The characters of Aaron and Eden are interesting, and their relationship believable if somewhat hurried.  All in all, I enjoyed STOLEN:  BETWEEN THE COVERS and recommend it for a light, erotic, and short read.


Three and a half Mystique Moons.  (Enjoyable)
Class Four sensuality.  (Romantic erotica)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator
 
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

WHAT I WANT by Rebecca Goins



Katherine Krieg has been lonely, since her husband's death.  Since she lives in a very remote  location and few of the townsfolk visit her.  The one exception to this is Jason Shepherd, her husband's best friend.  Since her husband's death, Jason has been coming to Katherine's place and helping with chores, but one day their relationship takes an interesting turn.

WHAT I WANT makes for a nice read, but lacks a feeling of completeness.  While this story is entertaining, it felt more like a hot sex scene from a longer book than a complete book.  For this reason, I had trouble connecting with the characters and wish that the story had been longer.

Three Mystique Moons.  (Enjoyable)
Class Four sensuality.  (Romantic erotica)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator
 
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

May. 10th, 2009

GABRIEL'S MISTRESS by Diana Bold



Amanda is left in a very bad position, when her protector dies leaving her penniless.  In order to support her child and herself, Amanda is forced to seek out the help of a pimp.  Luckily, her first client turns out to be a kind, very handsome man named Gabriel.

Even though GABRIEL'S MISTRESS is a very short story, the connection between Amanda and Gabriel is apparent.  While the sex scenes are hot, there are emotional ties established, which make an enjoyable, romantic romance.  This romance between two tortured characters is recommended for someone looking for a quick read.


Four Mystique Moons.  (Excellent)
Class Four sensuality.  (Romantic erotica)

Marlene Breakfield, Review Coordinator
 
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

May. 4th, 2009

BROKEN by I. G. Frederick



Interesting.  I've read the book through twice but still can't locate what was broken.  Perhaps it was the penis beneath the Domme's boot?

Really, though, it was the pride of our character that was broken.  A child of privilege, Jessica was used to the pampered life--and author Frederick ensured that we knew that by dropping more names in a chapter than a dumb-i-nant does at an Event.  (If you get the joke, than kudos to you!)  However, the untimely death of her father puts Jessica onto the skids.  There is no inheritance.  Suddenly she was--horrors--a regular student.  You know the kind, the ones that work as well as hit the books?  Unfortunately, there was only one Prof who had the option of taking on a graduate student that late in the semester.

Oh, yeah, every female grad student's nightmare.  "I'll help you, dah-ling, if you get undressed," whispers the spider to the fly.  Rather, orders the Master to a potential slave girl.  Would Jessica do it?  She did, and begins her year(s) long journey as a pleasure slave for Professor Limp Dick.  Time and unforseen circumstances happen and Jessica finds herself on the other end of the whip and realizes that she likes being Top.  And thus, we are introduced to the new Jessica.  Or...do we call her Mistress Jessica?

Two nits that caught my attention.  First, there was an amazing amount of misandry.  (Like that word?  I just found it. Means "man-hating".)  Jessica made her choices and I fail to understand why she'd develop such a hatred of the male.  Dommes that I know--and maybe it's just me--don't hate the male. They simply enjoy subjugating them.  But, it's not my book and it's not for me to tell the author how to develop her story. 

My second nit to pick is the lack of background. There is a lack of any texture in the story.  People don't speak, act, or exist in a vaccuum.  We hear, smell, and touch things all the time, merely putting that data into the back of our minds.  Author Frederick's style of writing excises any landscape, bringing only the point to the reader's attention.  It was like watching leading actors play their roles against a Blue Screen.  I missed the landscape and that is the reason for the four moon score.  It is this reviewer's opinion that all five senses need to be incorporated into a scene in order to paint a truly vivid picture of events.

All things considered, BROKEN was for me a fascinating introduction to a new genera of literature.  I've not yet decided if the genus is to my taste, or if not, but the introduction was fascinating.  Fabulous work, I. G. Frederick!


Four Mystique Moons.  (Fabulous)
Class Five sensuality.  (Raging Carnality)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

SHATTERED by I.G. Frederick



This book disturbed me on multiple levels.  Is that a bad thing?  Not at all.  After all, wasn't it Georges Braque who said, "Art is made to disturb?"  That is the reason for the five-moon rating.

I could not read the book.  A survivor of childhood abuse, I daily fight a similiar demon as the characters in SHATTERED.  Author I. G. Frederick delves far too deeply into the psyche of an incest survivor for my comfort.  Reading it, I was left choking on my own rage, my own memories, and my own issues with the lack of comfort in my own skin.  I know that I too have been, and remain, shattered by my past. Would it be possible for me to find respite in the lash?  To take the damage, the abuse, and create a healing beneath the whip? 

I do not know.  Perhaps I may never have the courage to find out.  What I do know is that I did not have the courage to read SHATTERED to its conclusion, and that is the ultimate compliment to book's author.

If art is meant to disturb, to reach out and touch an individual on a visceral level, then I.G. Frederick did so for this reader.  Not an easy accomplishment, for I have layers of scars over those woulds.  Read SHATTERED if you've a lion's heart.  Live it it you dare.

Five Mystique Moons.  (Outstanding)
Class Five sensuality.  (Raging carnality)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Apr. 13th, 2009

HUNGER by Sophie Athens



AWESOME!  A fabulous new look at Vampirism.

Olivia does the night shift, working as a counselor for the dinurally challenged.  (Yea, but I did create a word.)  It can be said that she burns the midnight oil in her quest to somehow cure--manage?--the bloodlust that rules a vampire's life.  Literally.  She counsels vampires who want to better interface with human society.  Is such a thing possible?  Olivia believes that it is and works dilligently to direct and modify bloodsucking behavior, especially when it's her own behavior in question.  Her own behavior?  That's right.  She's been turned. Marcus, vampire and owner of a Vamp/Human club, had done the deed and at her behest...and felt that Olivia had a lot of nerve crying foul now that the deed was done. 

Ok, that part wasn't very new but the part about talk therapy was new and pretty amusing if you ask me.  Talk about balls of steel!  Olivia must have a set the size of churchbells!  To beard the dragons in their element, shaking an allegorical finger in the face of the hunger.

The social and emotional dynamics inherent in such a wonderful setting were handled with class and a deft pen.  What on earth could have given Olivia not only the courage but the determination to make a difference in the lives of confused and unhappy vampires?  Out of respect to the author I won't reveal her plot device, but it was truthful and realistic handled with sensitivity.

My impression of the story was that the romance between Olivia and Marcus took a back seat against the overriding the of living one's life with courage.  Kudos to author Sophie Athens.  

I did have a nit, however, but it's a personal one and not one that I held against the author.  The card on the table, the one attached to the title and had been set before the reader--something the author wanted us to pay attention to?--simply vanished from the story.  I would have liked to have seen the author twine that into the story somehow.  But, as I said, that was my personal preference and it's not for me to tell someone how to write their book.  Overall, based on the Brave New World created by Sophie Athens for her vampires, this book was an excellent read. 

Nothing trite, banal, or hackneyed about it.  Rock on, Sophie Athens! 

Four and one half Mystique Moons.  (Excellent)
Class Four sensuality.  (Standard Romance)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Apr. 9th, 2009

INNOCENCE by Lia Morgan



No, No, NO!  Epic, epic No!! 

Joss is one pathetic vampire.  He hates his undead life, he hates that he has to drink blood to survive, he blames himself for the mob that murdered one of his bed-partners, yadda yadda yadda.  In totality, he's a whiny, morose vampire who prefers to lurk in the shadows and curse himself for the cowardly fiend he believes himself to be.

Elizabeth is a late night radio jock who is too stubborn for her own good.  She's attacked--what?--two or three times in the story.  (Lame plot devices.)  Even when the obvious is upon her, Elizabeth continues to lark about dark nights, walking through urban sprawl as though there's not a criminal mind within miles...even though she's getting letters upon letters from pervs and slimes of all types.  To the address where she works.  (Anyone hear of a P.O. Box?!  Anyone hear of armed security for employees?!)

Beyond the gratingly obvious plot devices used to bring Mr. Unhappy Vamp to our Brave Heroine  (read: moron), the alleged romance between the two is beyond trite.  [Just how does an undead revenant spurt jizz, I ask!  No, no, no!]  Then there's the Dark Moment that comes with all the finesse of a sledge hammer to the head of the reader.  What's this?  Our Brave Heroine is once again attacked on dark streets?  This time her life's blood is running out and the only way to save her is to "turn" her! Who would have thought of such an unusual thing? 

I've seen more originality among a flock of sheep.  Please, author Morgan, be advised that Mr. Morose saving the life of Brave (TSTL) Heroine who then vows to live HEA with him is beyond outdated.  I believe this theme was beat to death in Harlequin Romances of the 70s--sans the teeth, of course.  And with the multitudes of vampires in print, those of varying issues, challenges, and ect,., the option of doing something fabulously amazingly different was there.  Yet...this? 

Still, and as I say often, it's not my place to tell the author how to write her story.  It is my review, however, and thus I can pick my nits.  With all due respect ot author Lia Morgan, INNOCENCE was not to my taste.  Nor could I fathom the reason of the title.  Who in this story was innocent?  But I digress. 

May better reviews than this come to the author for future works.

Two Mystique Moons.  (Not my speed)
Class Three sensuality.  (Standard Romance)


Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

Apr. 8th, 2009

SWEET SURRENDER by Anna Leigh Keaton



Celeste makes a life-changing decision and invites a man home for a one-night stand.  No, not that creep, but the hero who burst through her door to save her. Mr. One Night Stand was a total sleaze bag!  Thank God Above that we have heroes like Detective Paul Jenson and kudos to author Keaton for letting us watch one of the Good Guys fall in love.

HOT!  HOT! HOT!  And surprisingly sweet.  Nothing like a man in tube sox and leopard-print skivvies!  Better, he's a hero to boot!  If you have cop fantasies, this book is for you.  If you don't have cop fantasies and like a sweet and sensual love story, this books is for you.  Any nits to pick?  But of course, darlings, but it's a tiny one.  The story was, by far, too formula.

Older woman, obsessed with her not-so-hard body, breasts that are no-longer-perky, and her jerk of an ex-husband who left her for a younger woman, it a bit hackneyed these days.  However, it is valid concern, as I remind myself every morning when I look into the mirror.  Brutalized self-esteem issues abound in this society that insists on perfection that we know is false.  (What's up with that anyway??)  But I digress.  So, Celeste is too embarrassed to enjoy the delights of her hot, Hot, HOT upstairs neighbor, our hero Paul.  Thus our hero must fight not only the bad guys but the demons in Celeste's mind.  However, he is up to the task and I was ok with that until she unleased her Dark Moment--one that unfortunately could be seen coming a mile away.

Now, I'm not going to spoil the story and please understand that I did enjoy this story.  Also remember that the formula used by author Keaton is a winning one.  Bu-ut, I was sort of hoping that a new spin might come onto the storyline.  That didn't happen but I'm not going to penalize the author for my expectations.  She did her job, giving us a tight story with believable characters, warm and sensual sexual scenes, and a wonderful vibrancy to her prose.

SWEET SURRENDER is a wonderful and excellent example of its type.  If you enjoy that style of predictability you will very much enjoy this story.  Indeed, I read it twice.  Once to review and twice just cuz I liked it.


Four Mystique Moons.  (Excellent)
Class Four sensuality.  (Romantic Erotica)

Brenda Thatcher, Co-Owner Mystique Books  
mystiquebooks@gmail.com

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